Our Learning Habitat had recently had a visit from ‘Little Bo Peep’ and her farm animals. The Learners had an opportunity to visit the ‘farm’ to touch, brush and learn about the different animals.
For our writing assessment, the Learners were invited to write about their ‘farm’ visit. They were encouraged to think about all the animals that they saw, and to use their senses to describe what they had seen, smelt, heard and touched.
Kaiariki planned her writing with a detailed picture and included several ideas in her writing. She used a capital letter to start her sentences, sounded out the initial letter and spelt a few high frequency words correctly. Kaiariki used the word ‘because’ to add why she felt a certain way. Both sentences were started the same way - ‘I like’.
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